I liked the eerie storytelling vibe from your tone. Each section being its own miniature story with little to no explanation added on to the experience. I would like to see more ideas of what the causes could be instead of just the one about the Earth’s electromagnetic fields.
I enjoyed being able to read about this and knowing that you know what you talk about through your voice. You come across as very knowledgeable, which I appreciated. I really enjoyed your 4th point and the way that your writing flowed. All of the things in the list were interesting to learn about, but this was the easiest for me to follow because of the way the sentences fit together. I think this is something that could be incorporated into future posts.
I really like you topic I think that is a super fun topic to take about, I like that you have the tone of the blog very informational. I like how you went into detail on each of the them, especially on number 2 where you put the quote of the last know words from the ship. You could put these more throughout the blog in our next one.
I liked the eerie storytelling vibe from your tone. Each section being its own miniature story with little to no explanation added on to the experience. I would like to see more ideas of what the causes could be instead of just the one about the Earth’s electromagnetic fields.
I enjoyed being able to read about this and knowing that you know what you talk about through your voice. You come across as very knowledgeable, which I appreciated. I really enjoyed your 4th point and the way that your writing flowed. All of the things in the list were interesting to learn about, but this was the easiest for me to follow because of the way the sentences fit together. I think this is something that could be incorporated into future posts.
I really enjoyed how serious your tone was. The lack of jokes really sets the creepy mood.
I liked your subtitle, it is a good transition and works in place of an intro.
I would like to see you lean into the creepy mood even more. I think this can be really mysterious.
I really like you topic I think that is a super fun topic to take about, I like that you have the tone of the blog very informational. I like how you went into detail on each of the them, especially on number 2 where you put the quote of the last know words from the ship. You could put these more throughout the blog in our next one.